The water flows around the earth
And sunlight kisses your skin
I pray that your heart won't leave me
As all of your beauty sinks in
Oh Bonnie my lass you were my home
The one I relished in
The one who walked with me through the rough
Reminding me of the world we called our own
No flower will ever meet my gaze
No sand that kisses the sea
Will ever match the beauty
that is right in front of me
Bonnie my lass how great thou are
My love is beyond compare
With that silent smile that relishes
in the magic that flows through the air
Nature has now claimed you as home
My heart will mourn for thee
As you leave the world you loved
I pray you will remember me
As the world seems out of place
As my heat calls for your name
Nature will remind that its not you too blame
Jacquelines request! A bit of a stretch but I hope you like it anyways. |
39450 - | | |   39458 -  Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-03-02 >> NEW
| | Thanks! |
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39450 - | | | 39457 -  Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-03-02 >> NEW
| | :) Beautiful! |
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39450 - | | | 39455 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-03-02 >> NEW
| | Thanks! |
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39450 - | | | 39454 - Reply from Amaani0 (Great Britain) - 2021-03-02 >> NEW
|  Great as always! |
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So I'm kinda running low on inspiration for poems so if ya'll want to give me a prompt for fun or something feel free |
39446 - | | | 39449 - Reply from Amaani0 (Great Britain) - 2021-03-01 >> NEW
| | Yes! Definitely try nature! |
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39446 - | | | 39448 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-03-01 >> NEW
| | Cool idea I'll start working on it! |
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39446 - | | | 39447 - Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-03-01 >> NEW
| | Perhaps nature? |
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 when online I'm always happy and strong
always has a joyful song
when in reality I hurt inside
everyone sees my cute and childish side
but I'm soft and weak
some times I want to cry
but I hide it with a smile
this is the real me
not he enthusiastic girl you see |
39438 - | | | 39443 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | :( |
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39438 - | | | 39442 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | I also hide my pain in exclamation marks and emojis😕 |
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39438 - | | | 39439 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | This is your best one yet! |
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so in this universe, the characters have kids here is my list.
aph+aaron: Abby, me but is a werewolf like Aaron(does not have her ears yet).
travis+katelen: kaly, we do not know much about her.
vlad+??: Vinn, Abby's bf.
nana/kawaii~chan+zane: lily, Abby's BFF.
garoth+lurence: luke, has a crush on Abby, Abby 2nd BFF
i will show pic.s of the characters with more details so look out for that on my account! |
39435 - | | | 39444 - Reply from Amaani0 , 10 yrs (Great Britain) - 2021-02-28 >> NEW
| | Sounds brilliant! |
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 Hello everybody! I've read all the collection of Harry Potter. Anybody would like to discuss about your favorite book? |
39427 - | | | 39440 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | i ment 1st |
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39427 - | | | 39434 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | the whole collection I didn't even finished the 3rd one |
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39427 - | | | 39432 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Hi Jose! I love Harry Potter but my favorite book will always be Ella Enchanted. |
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Why is it that I will never belong
Always be out of verse yet still in the song
Metallica and Bach never did get along
My soul is now begging me to leave
To run away just be free
With my heart upon my sleeve
My mind tries to run away
From what it will never understand
I beg it to give a try
Maybe make a friend
I know that I ramble and never make sense
But I promise if you listen
This won't be your last chance
If I learn to dance
I hope you'll sing along
Whether in the rain or shine
I promise our minds will intertwine
I know you will be mine
Through better or for worst
But I hope you won't forget
What our life was first |
39424 - | | | 39431 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Thanks! |
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39424 - | | | 39429 - Reply from Amaani0 (Great Britain) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Lovely! |
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39424 - | | | 39426 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Thank you! |
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39424 - | | | 39425 - Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Very beautiful! |
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Before I fall
I will learn to live
I will dance in the rain
Swing on a rope of stardust
Meet the girls like me
and know that magic does exist
I know you will brake my heart
For love only lives to die
And living is just the art of dying
Know my soul is the most valuable prize
More than silver and gold could buy
Thus it is mine to use
Through dark and through light
My candle at night
My savior in hell
More precious than one can tell |
39400 - | | | 39437 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | AWWWW your so sweet! |
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39400 - | | | 39433 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | I know it's going to be good when it's by Delaney |
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39400 - | | | 39407 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-21
| | Thank you! |
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39400 - | | | 39406 - Reply from Amaani0 , 10 yrs (Great Britain) - 2021-02-21
| | This poem has so much truth and depth to it! |
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39400 - | | | 39402 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-21
| | Thank you! |
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39400 - | | | 39401 - Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-20
| | Very good! |
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 Admiral Tsavvei Zhaal'Osatthai Fii'Qarhama stared intently out of the window as his dreadnought, the Bravely Charging Warrior, and its accompanying fleet dropped out of warp in the newly-discovered Rrashao system. The recent star-hunt had been successful, with Tier 1 and Tier 2 habitable planets being discovered and evidence of a Dyson Swarm being found. Clearly, the system was home to a promising advanced civilization.
"Finally, challenging opponents", Admiral Tsavvei thought. "Out of my many battles, this will surely be my greatest."
The last few ships dropped down to sub-light, and the fleet continued their advance towards their target, the Tier 1 planet that was slightly smaller than the Vaa'shauri homeworld of Xahana. The data from the star-hunter had indicated that the planet was densely inhabited, being home to roughly 11 billion individuals who primarily lived in gigantic metropolises.
"Admiral! Our sensors are picking up a radio signal being broadcasted in our direction! It appears to be some kind of music.", a technician roared.
Ah, yes, music... The usual greeting for a fleet before a planet was conquered. Admiral Tsavvei always took time to relish in the artistry of it all before an invasion.
"Show me.", he said.
Almost instantly, the sound of an orchestral tune filled the bridge, and Tsavvei's bobbed tail, almost unconsciously, swayed in tune. He was moved, he had to admit. But Tsavvei needed to focus on the task at hand.
"Deploy the Atmospheric Combat Drones.", he ordered once the song stopped, "and ready the kinetic rod cannons, too."
Admiral Tsavvei could see a swarm of A.C.D.'s fly out of the ship hangars of the fleet, and hear the whirring of the kinetic rod cannons being put on standby. The Rrashaoans couldn't see it coming.
Suddenly, a missile flew up from one of the planet's northern continents and hit the frigate Brightstar, which Tsavvei's sister Aqtashii commanded. It was destroyed immediately.
Tsavvei howl-roared in grief and rage.
"Fire the rods! Destroy all of their orbital habitats and major cities!", he commanded over the subspace ansible. "Fire continuously until nothing remains!"
A back-and-forth flurry of missiles and kinetic rods ensued. All major cities and habitats in the Rrashao system were destroyed, but not without losing a further sixty out of the fleet's 200 ships.
"Deploy the dropships and capture survivors.", Tsavvei said once the chaos was over.
The One Year's War has begun.
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I hope you guys enjoyed this short story! Let me know if you want another story from the opposing side's point of view! |
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39398 - | | | 39399 - Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-20
| | Also, I basically freestyled this story, so I'm sorry if it's confusing or just not that good. |
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39393 - | | | 39396 - Reply from Maddie55 , 10 yrs (Canada) - 2021-02-20
| | No problem! |
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Hi! My name Is Maddie. I really want to be a writer when I grow up and these are so good! I honestly can't believe how good these poems are. Great job! |
Siempre me ha gustado escribir. Desde niña siempre he querido escribir una novela pero cuando lo intento no puedo avanzar más de 5 hojas, tengo muchas ideas solo que, se me dificulta encontrar un orden. De verdad me gustaría mejorar en esto. |
39390 - | | | 39428 - Reply from Jose7 , 36 yrs (Peru) - 2021-02-26 >> NEW
| | Según lo que pude escuchar de algunos expertos. Ellos recomiendan escribir de forma constante. Es importante buscar un buen momento en el día para inspirarse y empezar a escribir los primeros borradores. Se requiere paciencia y bastante disciplina para lograr los objetivos que uno se proponga. Personalmente creo que hay que motivarse continuamente con alguien o algo que creamos que va ser una fuente de inspiración y motivación. |
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"Concordia" didn't work out, so I'm making a new universe and series with the help of NaNoWriMo. Say hello to the "Children of Earth" 'verse!
The new lore is that 3 different alien species decide to colonize the Solar System. Territorial disputes lead to a series of short-but-devastating wars, and a treaty is signed with humanity having no say in any of the conditions of said treaty, which divides the Solar System among the 3 species like this:
The Dhashvorrian Empire, a constitutional monarchy ruled by huge cephalopod-like beings who breathe hydrogen and live in the atmospheres of gas giants, get Jupiter and Saturn.
The Xzzi-ghrrum Collective, a government made up of small, highly adaptable, eusocial silicon-based creatures, are given Venus and Titan.
The United Prides of Youma Qoiru are given control over Earth, the Moon, and Mars.
The Youmahrri, a carbon-based feline species from Youma Qoiru, begin a program of taking human children to their homeworld to be raised and educated in their ways, with an end goal of making humans more subservient to their Empire. The first four books will follow four human teenagers who are being raised on Youma Qoiru as part of the program.
What do you guys think? |
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Darling your laugh lifted the sun
Your smile shifted tides
and gentle breathing calmed my shores
Now you are gone
Leaving my world in chaos
Writing scribbled on the walls
has clouded my vision
The waters have risen
Tsunamis hiding all joy
Demolishing the cities of my world
My heart has died with your soul
My smile is hidden in your grave
And the life of joy I used to love
Is now transfigured into madness |
39350 - | | | 39374 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-14
| | Thanks for the information. |
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39350 - | | | 39363 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-11
| | Thank you! |
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39350 - | | | 39362 - Reply from M223 , 15 yrs (Germany) - 2021-02-11
| | so beautiful! |
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39350 - | | | 39361 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-11
| | Thanks :) |
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39350 - | | | 39360 - Reply from Jacqueline137 , 15 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-11
| | Beautiful! |
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39350 - | | | 39359 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-09
| | Thank you! I have considered publishing my poems someday. |
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39350 - | | | 39358 - Reply from Amaani0 , 10 yrs (Great Britain) - 2021-02-09
| | Absolutely wonderful! You could make an Anthology with all your poems. They are so good! |
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 I read a poem about Dagestan. What do you think it is about? I have translated very poorly, I am not a master of translations. You can find poems by Andrey Tarkovsky in your language. Or maybe you are already familiar with his work.
Andrey Tarkovsky
Dagestan
I was lying on top of a mountain.
I was surrounded by earth.
The enchanted edge below
Lost all colors, except for two:
Light blue,
Light brown there,
Where Azrael's pen wrote on the bluestone.
Dagestan lay around me.
Did I wonder then
What's the last time
I read arabic letters on stones
proud land?
How dare I trade
odd and even love
The thin air of a mountain?
To be here
Melting in a spoon over yellow fire
Dagestani silver?
Sing:
"There I lived above the stream,
Washed in ice water
My simple clothes " |
39346 - | | | 39347 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-08
| | This is really beautiful! Thank you for translating it. |
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 Mom’s Letter
Postman, “O” Postman
Take the letter to Manhattan.
Take it to Manhattan.
The way is to widen,
The moment is to darken,
I know, but what’s I can?
Take the letter to manhattan.
Drop it in twelfth box,
Near the house of my children,
The house’s far about day ten,
Beside The Lion’s den.
Here are beach, field of sugar-cane,
Everyone lives, with hero and fan.
Postman, “O” Postman
Take the letter to Manhattan.
Take it to Manhattan.
Tell them, Mom’s feels written
In the letter, the promises broken.
It’s the end, The times' Lessen,
I will go near my Agrarian.
They left me as I Raven,
Tell them I am Mother,
And Mother has no color,
Mother has no clan.
Postman, “O” Postman
Take the letter to Manhattan.
Take it to Manhattan. |
39302 - | | | 39349 - Reply from Muhaiminul30 , 21 yrs (Bangladesh) - 2021-02-08
| | I'm from Bangladesh |
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39302 - | | | 39348 - Reply from Darel206 , 25 yrs (Slovakia) - 2021-02-08
| | Great job, where are you from? I wonder what influenced your handwriting so much |
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39302 - | | | 39332 - Reply from Muhaiminul111 , 21 yrs (Bangladesh) - 2021-02-07
| | Thanks all |
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39302 - | | | 39331 - Reply from Abbey70 , 13 yrs (Canada) - 2021-02-07
| | Hello! This is really good! You should write more! |
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39302 - | | | 39306 - Reply from Amaani0 (Great Britain) - 2021-02-01
| | Nice! |
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39302 - | | | 39305 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-01
| | This is really good! |
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I decided to take a small break from my science fiction story to work on a Warriors fanfiction where an apocalyptic event (a minor asteroid impact to be specific) causes most of the Twolegs (humans) to disappear, and the cats now have to contend with dwindling resources, stray dogs, escaped zoo animals, and many other dangers. It specifically focuses on two kittypets named Cookie and Nero. They survive the immediate effects of the impact, and travel along an abandoned road, eventually stumbling upon the current Clan territories and joining either ShadowClan or Skyclan (I have not decided yet).
At this point, I ran into some issues, including the fact that I'm a bit out of the loop when it comes to Warriors lore, which Clan they should join, how to make the effects of a meteor strike realistic, and a few others. Can a qualified fan please help me out here? Thanks in advance! |
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bored I am
I'm learning about Abraham
"hurry up!"I think
she's taking forever, getting a drink
daydream I start to
Anthony does too
wake up they yell
I hear the bell
no more boring class |
39290 - | | | 39324 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-02-04
| | thanks |
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39290 - | | | 39293 - Reply from Amaani0 (Great Britain) - 2021-01-29
| | Good one! |
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39290 - | | | 39292 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-29
| | Nice! |
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When there is a fire inside my heart
When my soul is yearning to leave
there is only one thing I can do
Allow my life to leave me
Only to jump into my imagination
And flow into paper
Creating a new life
Oh if I pause even for a moment
My skin becomes a cage
My mind is renamed prison
And my heart will soon die
This my dear is why I write
Why I explore lost caverns
Why all of me glows with life
Just know that without the imagination
Life would leave
Hearts would stop
And all love would leave the world
Dedicated to Delilah for her encouraging words |
39282 - | | | 39286 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-28
| | Glad you guys like it! |
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39282 - | | | 39284 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-28
| | 1st of all amazing. 2nd awwwwwwwwwww thanks! |
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39282 - | | | 39283 - Reply from Amaani0 , 10 yrs (Great Britain) - 2021-01-28
| | This one is AMAAZING! It's exactly how I feel but it's so expressively put. I absolutely love it! It has to be your best one.😁💕 |
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a poet as good as can be
the poet's name I see
I ask for advice
I find out she's nice
Delaney she is, the inspirer |
this poem is dedicated to Delaney
a poet as good as can be
the poet's name I see
I ask for advice
I find out she's nice
Delaney, she is the inspirer |
39278 - | | | 39280 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-27
| | You are so very very kind! I'm not sure why you think I'm such a good poet but I really appreciate your kind words. Never stop writing and I know someday you'll do amazing things! |
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people in the teacher's seat
people making noises while they eat
people running
people sleeping
people plain out going insane
HOW AM I STAYING SANE!! |
39267 - | | | 39285 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-28
| | thanks!☺️ |
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39267 - | | | 39271 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-27
| | See this is great!!! You don't need my help. |
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Girls with minds like a thousand stars
Girls who worry if they go to far
Girls with a heart made of glass
Girls who hope the darkness will pass
It blows my mind to see
that their are girls like me
Whose heart has broken a dozen times
Whose soul leaps at every sun rise
Who dreams of tomorrow
instead of relishing today
Its extraordinary that girls are like this
In every which way
And now I wish they were all near
So I could mend their many scars
We would love each other
And show them their is no reason to fear
But now I'm doubting if you exist
Because society I fear
That their mind is fixed
On broken lies
That a woman is an object
That has no different design
Hey guys tell me what you think in the replies!
P.S Raya I hope you like his one better |
39246 - | | | 39272 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-27
| | Aww stop! I don't know I just like poetry I guess. I really liked your poem too. |
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39246 - | | | 39268 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-27
| | it's so much better than anything I saw, EVER. I could never withe like that! don't even get me started on the fact your only 13! |
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39246 - | | | 39259 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-22
| | Aww thats so kind of you! I wasn't very confident in this poem so that means a lot. |
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39246 - | | | 39258 - Reply from delilah117 , 10 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-22
| | OMI(oh my irene, it is a mystreet reference). I wish I could write like that. |
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39246 - | | | 39248 - Reply from Delaney37 , 13 yrs (USA) - 2021-01-19
| | Thank you Amaani! Those are my favorites too. |
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39246 - | | | 39247 - Reply from Amaani0 , 10 yrs (Great Britain) - 2021-01-19
| | This one is brilliant but I still love To dance in the rain and Description of myself best |
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Bonjour🙏🙏 moi c ibrahima gueye sénégalais âgés De 20ans
Je suis un joueur de football attaquant de pointemon coule préférè bleu
J'aime voyage pour découvrire |
Oh to feel sunshine on your skin
To run into a crashing wave
To feel one with earth
is all I will ever ask
that and to dance in the rain
To sing ballads of old
In a crowded street
To strum my guitar
without fear of being good enough
Is all I will ever need
That and to be able to
Dance in the rain
To kiss you underneath the stars
With a full moon in view
Feel stardust shine in our veins
Is the best to be offered
That and to be able to dance in the rain.
Is the most I'll ever need |
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