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modify delete 18171 - from Meg , 15 y.o. (ALA) - 2012-08-27
Librarian : "name poem:Commando Elite :D"

Commrads
Only fights for good
Made of awesomeness
Made in China[get it?]
Awesome
Never run out of batteries
Doesn't quit
Only in america

Extra tough
Loseing ain't an option
I see them as good guys
Totally cool
Extra macho.
:D


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modify delete 18223 - Reply from Brunnhilde , 11 y.o. (USA) - 2012-08-29

Also, your poem isn't a poem at all. It just tells what your action figures are like.

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modify delete 18222 - Reply from Brunnhilde , 11 y.o. (USA) - 2012-08-29

Sure. Here(poems must make sense and have NO misspellings):
Lords of wind, water, and fire,
What will soothe my hearts desire?
What will make the fire of love in my heart be cooled?
Is it that girl, or am I being fooled?

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modify delete 18209 - Reply from Meg , 15 y.o. (ALA) - 2012-08-29

could you give me an example plz?*puppy face*

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modify delete 18208 - Reply from Brunnhilde , 11 y.o. (USA) - 2012-08-29

You read books, right? You know how they are interesting and full of DETAIL? Poems require SOME detail.

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modify delete 18200 - Reply from Meg , 15 y.o. (ALA) - 2012-08-28

how so?

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modify delete 18188 - Reply from Brunnhilde , 11 y.o. (USA) - 2012-08-27

Awesome! You have a few spelling mistakes though. And, you might want a little more detail.



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