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modifier supprimer 39530 - de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-03-15
Ecrivain : "The one I used to love"

You wore a suit on a simple date
Never did touch the food on your plate
Said I was all you needed
Danced with me in the rainy September
Love me said you'd always remember
The date of our first kiss
Now my heads underwater
My breath is in my lungs
I pray you'll allow me to live
When was the day
you gave all to me
The day that you held my hand
I pray that you'll hold me
but you'll never show
That we'll still be their
when you let me go
The fountain of your dreams
We would always splash in the streams
No matter the way they would look at ya
Oh where have the memories gone?


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modifier supprimer 39535 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-03-16

Thanks! Your also very good!

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modifier supprimer 39533 - Réponse de Maddie , 10 ans (CAN) - 2021-03-16

Awesome! You are so good at poetry!



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