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modifier supprimer 39246 - de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-01-19
Ecrivain : "Girls like me"

Girls with minds like a thousand stars
Girls who worry if they go to far
Girls with a heart made of glass
Girls who hope the darkness will pass
It blows my mind to see
that their are girls like me
Whose heart has broken a dozen times
Whose soul leaps at every sun rise
Who dreams of tomorrow
instead of relishing today
Its extraordinary that girls are like this
In every which way
And now I wish they were all near
So I could mend their many scars
We would love each other
And show them their is no reason to fear
But now I'm doubting if you exist
Because society I fear
That their mind is fixed
On broken lies
That a woman is an object
That has no different design

Hey guys tell me what you think in the replies!
P.S Raya I hope you like his one better

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modifier supprimer 39272 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-01-27

Aww stop! I don't know I just like poetry I guess. I really liked your poem too.

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modifier supprimer 39268 - Réponse de delilah , 10 ans (USA) - 2021-01-27

it's so much better than anything I saw, EVER. I could never withe like that! don't even get me started on the fact your only 13!

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modifier supprimer 39259 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-01-22

Aww thats so kind of you! I wasn't very confident in this poem so that means a lot.

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modifier supprimer 39258 - Réponse de delilah , 10 ans (USA) - 2021-01-22

OMI(oh my irene, it is a mystreet reference). I wish I could write like that.

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modifier supprimer 39248 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2021-01-19

Thank you Amaani! Those are my favorites too.

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modifier supprimer 39247 - Réponse de Amaani , 10 ans (GBR) - 2021-01-19

This one is brilliant but I still love To dance in the rain and Description of myself best

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