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modifier supprimer 39120 - de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10
Ecrivain : "Per aspera ad astra"

You dreamed of reaching the sky
swing on saturn's rings
dance with the revolution of earth
I smiled patted your head and said
Per aspera ad astra my dear
Through hardships to the stars
You grew older
broken and bruised
you marched on
wondering if you could ever be the same
I kissed all your scars gave you a hug
and said
Per aspera ad astra
through hardships to the stars
You grew blossomed into a rose
they broke your heart
again and again
When you returned home sobbing through pain
I cried with you and said
per aspera ad astra
through hardships to the stars
Then my dear you left the comfort of the nest
spread your wings to fly
You reached the stars
I never had any doubt
I smiled through tears
and said
Per aspera ad astra
through hardships to the stars


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modifier supprimer 39126 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-11

Thank you so much!

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modifier supprimer 39125 - Réponse de Amaani , 10 ans (GBR) - 2020-12-11

It was clever to base the poem on a Latin phrase. It makes the poem unique!

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modifier supprimer 39124 - Réponse de Amaani , 10 ans (GBR) - 2020-12-11

This is such a tender and motivating poem!

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modifier supprimer 39122 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10

Thank you!

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modifier supprimer 39121 - Réponse de Jacqueline , 15 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10

I like it!




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