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modifier supprimer 39109 - de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-09
Ecrivain : "Do you believe in Magic?"

On a cold winter's night
I look out see my breath in the air.
On wedding day I see how the sun shines on your face
When our child is born I see the glow of life in her eyes
On that night when every star is in view
You ask me this question
and I laugh
I tell you to look around
Taste the crisp breath of nature
Remember the night we met
How all of the universe existed in your mind
How else could this occur?
Fate? Perhaps a mere coincidence?
little do you know
The look a mother gives a child
The soft and tender whisper of love
What are these made of?
Magic my love. Sheer magic
When the day you leave me comes
When our child leaves the comfort of our nest
When she spreads her wings to fly
Magic will keep us bound together.

Tell me what you think in the reply section!

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modifier supprimer 39275 - Réponse de delilah , 10 ans (USA) - 2021-01-27

wow its amazing

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modifier supprimer 39118 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10

Thank you so much!

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modifier supprimer 39117 - Réponse de Jacqueline , 15 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10

Simply beautiful!

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modifier supprimer 39116 - Réponse de Delaney , 13 ans (USA) - 2020-12-10

Thank you so much! I wasn't that sure about this poem but I'm glad you like it.

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modifier supprimer 39115 - Réponse de Amaani , 10 ans (GBR) - 2020-12-10

This is such a beautiful poem Delaney. You'r really good at poetry!

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